Shou_Ryuu_6282

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He is trying best!!!!

sauce?

where are youuuuu

Okay first of all I really love this story, it's a 10 our of 10 for me. Yes something's might need a bit more work, but it's only small and very little stuff. I really love how you let her character flesh out and be pretty realistic, how she still feels human instead of how other stories might make her more of a 1 in a million type of person. I'm not completely sure why Shane is just rolling with her but from what I read so far I'm guessing it's because she kinda butterflied a lot of the events that led to his breakdown. I love the story so far.