Elliot_Jackson

It was fine up until he turned into the usual phycopath oc mc’s that I find on this site in the dc arc. Honestly at least show some guilt, even if it was self defense,such a change is hard to go through without development, not magically deciding to be a killer for the greator good.

Also he was an anime fan so that stays with him.

I fixed it thanks.

Thanks for the review

Thank you.

What is most popular in Norse, Make the comparison.

This is going to be a start, I plan to make it develop into the Asgard we all know and love today, so have a bit of patience, I will explain everything.

The only problem is that the story seems kind of bland… like maybe it’s just how the story is written.

I’l explain more about this world in the next chapter

What if Krillin was like Saitama