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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ehhh, the book is interesting, but the author needs to do more world building...Lets see how the storyy goes

need more chapters 😸

will do!

interesting ...

Ok so first of all, I think that it's a great idea to write a novel on as well as the grammar is not a problem. What I would like to add though would be that you could phrase your words better....

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Hello everyone, fellow reader here. The synopsis looks good and the language is not bad either... The synopsis is awesome and I hope the author finishes the story...

Well, the main plot has finally been set! Thank god it has started... I would die reading the back story... Overall the novel's really nice. The grammar is above average but can be improved... I hope the author continues this book... thanks