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The story is progressing nicely until the "delegate from the east" arrived, thoroughly disrupting the flow of the story. The character's personality seemed to have changed abruptly, shattering the already established plot of the story. The notion for this change to be a plot twist is not going nicely. And the perspective and style of the writing has changed from a british one to a more chinese one, evidenced by the transition from a calculative thoughts of the characters to a more rash and brazen actions and thoughts of the characters. All in all this is still an ok story and I'll update this review more as I progress in the story.
It's giving Kardashians 😭😭😭
Ha has a near infinite supply of mana. Like in tge future if his max. mana capacity was 10,000 he would be able to decover 1000 every second. That's pretty op considering that it's an F rank talent. A re-evaluation is needed.
You should add space right after every punctuations
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The quality of writing is impecable👌.
I vote for this.
Spacial Magic: Spacial Domain- create adomain where you can percieve all the things whithin its range and have slight control with them Spacial Blast: gather mana into a tiny compressed ball to the point where the space around it is warped Reality Slash: slash and annihilate all matter in a straight line Spacial Collapse: collapse the space on a targeted location in which a spacial storm will occur that will shred all those inside it sealing of space: seal the space on a spherical shape and the things sealed in it will not be able to get out if they dont have higher mana than the caster.
So it means that the higher the level the more potent it becomes?
deserve😏😏😏