FREAKKETTONE

this is by far my favourite novel... you inspired me so much... I will try writing something for myself only though hahahah... anyway keep this up! 🔥

Wow! Just wow! Very well written and interesting story. The world building is fascinating and really well done... You are updating daily and also the story has a really great flow. I like how the realms and various races that inhabit them interact, I still don't know how you will make it work as it seems pretty difficult to me allready, but I have great expectation for this novel. Keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

A very good start! Well, I must say I'm not a fan of female lead but this is some good novel. Unexpected devlopment and interesting character growth... But I have to say you should be careful around the consequences of Julia's action. She killed a person without a care in the world, but she didn't really took care of the aftermath. Rimember that anyway you see it, she is the primary suspect for the murder... Anyway keep it up it is really intriguing. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Thanks for your support, keep reading as Marduk and my story further devlop.[img=recommend]

Thanks for the heads up! And yeah the Mc may seem too OP but you will see he will struggle a lot in the future.

thanks for the review, it means a lot to me. [img=recommend]

Thanks for the review, I'm still in my first steps as a writer and your advice is really important and helpful to me. I will work harder on the points and problems you stressed, thanks again.

Simply one of the best starting novel I have read. Good writing quality, well done world building and an interesting plot. I'm officially hook up, Keep it up, I'm enthrilled.

A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.

Thanks for the review! [img=recommend]