new chapter! wowww

Hi, Author here. I hope you guys enjoy my work, If you had any question about this book feel free to ask me about it.

hope there was another chapter for this week

here I come[img=recommend]

Ich komme aus Malaysia, bald studiert ich in Deutschland

during the first month of this book, I write it completely alone without anyone to help me out. Now I had other friend to help me check it, so it might improve? I not really sure about it, but hope you enjoy.

yeah, this chapter was written very early on, and I put it as an auxiliary chapter and for some reason it was the first chapter to appear, I still editing and rewrite some of the early chapter

this chapter was a small side story of a character, you might figure it out later

do you mean my English or the English in the novel?

Amazing novel, you can feel the effort the author put in his work, amazing writing and world creation. I wish I could saw more good twist on the plot.

Wait? does this mean his mother pregnent at age 16? I need to called FBI

a good novel indeed, the story is mostly been pushed by dialogue, which the author handle it decently (at least not bad) , the highlight of the novel was okayu(nope) its character design and the world building. However the world building was a classic fantasy world that might lack luster for some person. Overall, it's a nice novel for someone enjoy slice of life fantasy

Very impressive beginning! What a perfect skill to bring the thrill to the audience. The character was well built, but the world building was restricted due to the nature of realistic novel. A great novel for who like novel with mystery element

A very solid novel indeed, the writing was very good and could bring you into the story easily. What impressed me the most was the second chapter, the detailed and heartwarming writing really able to let reader immersed into the story. The character was will built with unique characteristic. Overall it was a amazing novel for people that interested in romance

This is a book that nothing to sneeze at, the story started with an interesting plot, world building and the background of the MC was revealed, the only thing that might impact the experience might be were the chapter stopped, but that's really depends on personal preference. Overall it was a novel that you didn't want to miss if you interested in this genre

The biggest advantage of this book is the overall world building, the character design and the story. However, if you watching with phone from 1st chapter, you will 100% struggle with long paragraph and lack of stop in sentence, however the quality of writing significantly improved in later chapter, other issue is mainly on constant switching POV, you might struggle if you don't get used to it.

your name is actually already appear in the mid of the story during eternity showing the med report, but your person appear at the end of the story.

Barely any critic can be given in this novel, such an amazing piece. The writing skill of the Author was very mature, load of beautiful, well flow sentence with stop that just in time, a complete enjoyment by reading it.

A total master piece of a novel, the beginning of the story is perfectly executed with full spark of creativity. Other than that, the character is perfectly built with unique personality and story, despite having some minor problem on constant repeat of word, but it didn't cover the fact that Author had clear Idea on "What he want to write" and "What did he written", which unlike other author had rather weak ability to identify it.

The overall writing quality is undeniable good, there is some typo here and there but not something can ruin your experience. The highlight of the novel is First-person type of writing with the thought of the MC appear here and there. The positive side is It help to create the character of MC really quickly and give some comedic effect with those "untold words", but also had clear down side, sometime it will interrupt the flow of the plot and conversation. Constant switching between what MC "heard" and "Think" also sometime hard to catch up, if not getting used to it. As other slow-phased novel, the biggest trouble of this book are rather slow character build up and plot line. The world building are completed in first couple chapter, but the plotline(or main target of MC) are yet to appear . Other issue are the characteristic of side-character is weaker compare to the MC. However it just a common problem for these kind of novel. As long as more backstory about character revealed and the story moved forward, this novel could reach a higher peak