Writing Quality: No mistakes Stability of Updates: Seems like once a day but the words for the second chapter don't seem consistent with the first chapter. Not sure if it's done deliberately. Story Development: I like the genre of the story and where it seems to be going. I love store owner stories and the potential journey through different layers spices up the story for me more. Character Design: I am liking it so far. World Background: Massive...I enjoy such backgrounds!

Good Beginning!