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Magical Girl Sidekick is a fun and unique take on the magical girl genre that I haven't seen before. The characters are all likable and relatable, which made it easy to get into the story. The plot was interesting and fast-paced, with lots of twists and turns. Overall, this is a great light novel for anyone looking for something different from their usual read.
Thank you so much for the encouraging words 🙏
Hello, looks really good. The author has solid grammar, so it gives the read an easy flow. The characters have some depth to them as well. Cheers :)
I can really feel the emotion of the main character. The author does a good job of conveying her inner life and that establishes a connection with the audience. The one thing I suggest, is to add some dialogue to the first chapter. Thanks for the swap!
This is really well-written. The author has really superior descriptive skills and a nice prose style. It's from a technical perspective everything is great. I think more updates would help a lot.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm definitely writing it for my fellow weebs
I like the story. But there are a lot of technical problems with the writing. Still, if you're just looking for an engaging story and good world building it's still a good look.
Very good! Strong writing. Great world building. Definitely great if you like speculative story telling with solid action. The art on the cover is great too. Looking forward to more
That's very helpful feedback, thank you 🙏