MartiniSippinAngel

So many naive, childish comments. Even if you interpret this as propaganda, I still see nothing wrong with it. World politics are extremely brutal, especially for countries not aligned with the West. Proxy wars, assassination, CIA instigated civil wars, economic warfare, etc. If countries like China were as easy-going and carefree as you Westerners, they would be carved up and dominated. Btw, ALL countries propagandize their citizens, get over it.

This is a story worth reading. Give it a shot. It has a familiar setting and setup for web novel veterans, but it is well written, has interesting characters, and picks up steam as you go along. It could use less internal monologues and philosophical musing, but that's not too big a deal. The one gripe I have is multiple POVs around the same events. If they add to the story or reveal some aspect that is not covered in Lucavions POV, fine. However, there are multiple instances where the pov changes and the same event is described, eye witness like, with little added commentary or content that advances the plot. Aside from this, so far, I've had a blast reading, and strongly recommend readers try out this new spin on novel transmigration.

Authors need to be humble enough to admit that they aren't smart enough to write mathematics/science/tech skills, especially proficiency panel STEM skills.