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HolyDreamer

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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1d
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    Shameless five stars. Please give me all the critique possible. I want to do justice to Shadow Slave's amazing novel. I am merely a novice at writing fiction, though, so please, any advice and ideas you can contribute would be great to hear.

    Shadow Slave: Prince of the Underworld
    Livres et littérature · HolyDreamer
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1d
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    I wonder what Valor would think of him

    Aspect Description: [You are a sword who was forged in the depths of hell and quenched with the divine blood of the War Goddess. You were the greatest creation of the greatest blacksmith of them all, which makes you a sword above all the rest. All types of weapons recognize you as their master. The blacksmith created you in his own image, and left behind one simple, yet daunting task. Destroy Fate.]
    Forged In Hell - Shadow Slave Fanfic
    Livres et littérature · Type_Sword
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1d
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    Minds like a steel trap

    Attributes: [Mark of Divinity], [Mind of Steel], [Child of Swords], [???].
    Forged In Hell - Shadow Slave Fanfic
    Livres et littérature · Type_Sword
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1d
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    Honestly wasn't deserved in my opinion

    [Final Appraisal: glorious.]
    Shadow Slave: Necrosis
    Livres et littérature · Stygian_Monarch
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer2d
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    Childish honestly

    (Does everyone like the wholesome scenes involving Tyrel and Saphira?)
    Shadow Slave: Necrosis
    Livres et littérature · Stygian_Monarch
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer2d
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    Perhaps his nightmare had ties to the Daemon of Oblivion. He has forgotten everything after touching the girl, perhaps she has powers tying to Oblivion? bit of a stretch

    Ch 4 4: The Child
    Shadow Slave: New God
    Livres et littérature · SadPepe
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer3d
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    Honestly it was a rocky start with the grammar but you have improved drastically. You are actually thinking of new things and changing the plot. Good job author

    Ch 50 Chapter 50
    Ayanokouji in Shadow Slave
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Rick_playback
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer4d
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    I’m giggling and kicking my legs bro. G3 got me acting like a little girl

    'I love Nephis.'
    Shadow Slave
    Fantaisie · Guiltythree
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer6d
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    "May Chaos take the world." With a satisfied smile, Joe stopped monologuing and stepped into the shower. 
    Marvel: I Have A Super USB Drive
    Anime et bandes dessinées · OneArmedImmortal
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer7d
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    The main reason he hadn't stood up or left his chair even once...was because he was sitting in just his briefs, having used his pants to create the swarm of Ice-nanites.
    Son Of The Savage (a DC Comics SI)
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer8d
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    - Architectural Animation: The power to bring architectural creations to life, animating statues, golems, or even entire buildings
    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Livres et littérature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer21d
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    Finally he’s got a body so hype

    Ch 68 Azula's Wish
    Avatar The Last Airbender: Spirit
    Anime et bandes dessinées · FanFictionForge
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer24d
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    Eventually after a long I got used to the pain and finally opened my eyes. I can finally see. So many colors… Its so bright and vivid. Its like switching from thirty frames to 4k. There are other things out there. Monsters, dimensions left untapped or occupied. I was in so much awe of what was going around me… so much so I forgot an important lesson.
    Mercenary (Asoiaf)
    Livres et littérature · Ash_D_Born
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer24d
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    "We're going back to the Dead End with this one," Barbara — One of the two 'Bat prodigies' attending today's meeting — said sarcastically. "Rejoice."
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Daddy
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer29d
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    E-D rank*

    On my third birthday, Grandpa gave me a special shirt woven with fine chakra-conducting wire, just like the vests worn by elite jonin. Just charge it with chakra, and you get an impenetrable barrier against any metal and most weak E-S rank techniques.
    Red Nara
    Anime et bandes dessinées · l_legolas
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer30d
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    You are too good author I give all my stones!!!!

    Ch 72 Chapter 72 The World is My Sword.
    The Reincarnator's Tavern
    Films · GnomeBob
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer30d
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    Mihawk nodded and said, "Then I shall name it. Hmm. Very well. It shall be called World Sword Style. Your sword is not a physical object, but you use the world itself as your blade."
    The Reincarnator's Tavern
    Films · GnomeBob
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1mth
    Répondu à RAAAHHHHH
    I didn't really know what to make of this since I clearly remembered my name from my previous life. The fog was not strong enough to make me forget core memories like that, so maybe this Name represented something else. 
    Danmachi - Depthless Hunger
    Anime et bandes dessinées · FangYuan1234
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1mth
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    However, when Xu Xing tried to reverse his position, he lost his balance and almost fell, catching himself just in time to avoid a humiliating dive into the ground.
    Dou Luo: This Tang San is Different
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Un1que
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  • HolyDreamer
    HolyDreamer1mth
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    It’s like laws in cultivation lol. I love it

    Rayleigh suspected this was how Fishman Karate worked. Martial moves using the specific flow of Water. Of course, Water contained many flows, so each Fishman Karate technique likely used one of the flows within the flow of water.
    The Reincarnator's Tavern
    Films · GnomeBob
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