Krlnkir

Tell me you don't understand the basics of relativity without telling me you don't understand the basics of relativity. (I realise it's just a fantasy story, so this isn't actual criticism. But the line made me laugh out loud at how ridiculous it was.)

There are a lot of bad stories here. There are a few decent ones. And then there are a handful of stories like this one, which make this platform worth visiting. Excellent characters, whose motives make sense, yet do not all align. A suitable balance of OP MC and struggles to overcome. The r18 bits are mostly actually relevant to the plot, whilst being enjoyable in their special way. A fun read. Maybe not to everyone's taste, but for those who enjoy this sort of thing, it is close to the pinnacle.

Probably meant "naivety", not "nativity". Unless his face is a diorama celebrating the birth of Jesus, which to be fair would also throw opponents off-guard.

First few chapters are okay. Writing is a bit muddled, switching between 1st 2nd and 3rd person. In later chapters, writing gets worse, and the author literally copy-pastes entire paragraphs to pad space. Do not read this story.