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To be honest the book titles attract me the most and didn't read the synopsis... Has so much potential in this story. I like the way you describes the scene when he died and more things And other than this world background is nice Story Plot:Excellent Language:Nice Character Design:Good Description:Excellent Well done author...looking forward to your story.[img=recommend]
Is he is going to die?
Nice start,i liked how you describes the thought of Lucifer... looking forward to your story..
Hey! sixteen years old male should be boy not man
Gone is familiar name for me because in my country "gon the stonage boy" named cartoon is run...
seems he is scientist?
Hey! FriendlyAuthor121 is here.This story is totally different. Synopsis A very calm, straightforward, well-looked, liveing in her world, Aditi, a girl from small-town Lucknow. When she goes to Delhi for higher studies, meets with a cool, handsome, and confident boy, Attirek who loses his heart and falls for Aditi and decides to fill her colorless life with all kinds of colors, but their first meeting is such that Aditi hates him. Will Attirek be able to reduce this hatred and make a place in Aditi's heart? Will the love of Attirek be "perfect" or will it remain "untold"? If you find any grammatical mistakes then please let me knows in comments.And support this book through your reviews and power stones.
Everything is excellent,I think who are interested in adventurous and reincarnation genre type book they should add this book in their library Story Plot:nice World Background: excellent Grammar:i won't able to say something about this because mine is also not so good good job author...keep writing..[img=recommend]
when I read fog suddenly an episode of Doraemon flash in my mind..
Nowadays boys mostly plays battle games..
it was like any action film...
This book shows so much potential....you all should who are interested in this type genre should come and read this novel... Now coming to the topic, character design is excellent and story plot or theme is also nice...At last keep writing author...lots of good luck to you..[img=recommend][img=recommend]