David_Arenas

and Manipulation and Conjuration are only 60%.

It's a good story. The development of the duels is clear and consistent, certainly illustrating the mc as a great duelist, and the interactions with the romantic interests show a slightly more realistic view of harem relationships. However, I'm skeptical of the addition of unofficial cards just for the sake of convenience, and I'm annoyed that the story was put on hold.

I have thought about her. It could be possible to include her, but she has this strange thing with Hisoka, is deadly loyal to Chrollo, and has a quite cold personality. That's why I haven´t included her.

She only appears during the Hunter Exam arc, and doesn't display any skills other than knife handling. It could be included, but it would be forced and not go with the flow.

Corrections: 1. Your descriptions of towns are too generic and repetitive. 2. The old hag's divination should have come much earlier in the story. 3. Obtaining the Gold Dust Girl is the least realistic of all. 4. What happens at the end with Hana and the old hag? Explain the outcome.

<<Only temporal, not permanent>>

<<That doesn't fit>>

I should have known better not to underestimate you little boy."

<<You should add it's the next day>>

she turned into a card.