Ciel_Best_Waifu

BEAUTIFUL!!!

I must say, before I started to read I was quite skeptical about the story since my heart doesn't really beat for the boys fanfictions but after I read the first chapters I kinda got hocked. Part for that reason is your writing stile that really makes it comfortable to read as well as the POV switches among the characters to provide a wider view. But what really got me were the details you included about the characters and how the acted (Cinder tormenting star light). It made them more interesting and left me in anticipation for what came next. The only thing that I didn't like was the world travel concept since I like it more if the fanfic is committed to one world but that is preference I guess.

probably

I think she has a class in vampire princess, but it could also be just her title. I am not sure

Yeah, difficult to see you lose if you believe yourself the smartest in the room. Still Cinder in the show was the worst villain in my opinion, almost all of them were more mid than good but she was just so damn cliché it makes me mad.

Kinda got cu*ked with this chapter

Thats definitely better than canon Cinder. Makes her look more like a mastermind and not a 2d villain.

Ohh I love to see these chapters about the inner workings of the other nations. Bless you.😇

To funny