AceTheHonoredOne

most mc's are orphans, so that the author doesn't have to waste time with their interaction, if they're not important in the story. Also about making it hard for the mc, it wouldn't be a fun story without conflict or would you read a story where the mc already has everything?

Yeah I started this series without much planning, so because it's my first time writing a fanfiction I did a couple of mistakes, including how powerful he can be, so I have to somehow correct that by nerfing him. However I'm 99% sure he can only use sage mode for a couple seconds. If you know any moment where he used it more then that, you could tell me and I could check it out✌🏻

Just because he wants the metal doesn't mean he can only do that. Imagine you get into the world of marvel, wouldn't you want to experience different things and adventures? It's not like metal will run away or something, he can still get it afterwards. He has about a decade before Thanos arrives so he doesn't have to rush everything. Hope that clears it up!👍🏻

It isn't filler. It's just a sub-plot insetad of "He went to the Savage Lands, got metal and then left." I want to give my story more depth and I can achieve that by letting things happen at different places with different people. Hope you understand now!👍🏻

Qell a little backstory is important, so that the strenght of the character he will be fighting somewhat makes sense but worry not! There will soon be a longer fight!

I like that he's weak at the start but he is extremely idiotic or has no willpower at all. He wants to commit suicide because he couldn't become strong in 1 month? If he trained enough, he could become strong enough to split mountains but just because he didn't get strong enough to beat Tom in 1 month he wants to kill himself? Especially in a world where you can go from 'extremely weak' to atleast 'alright' in months(Coby). Extremely weak-willed MC in my opinion.🤨

Well, I'll think about it. Those are really good suggestions and since I want to use some characters, that are less talked about, I'll do some research and decide then. Thank you for your suggestion!

Adonis is a handsome greek god and saying "I look like a young adonis" basically just means that he is very handsome.

No this is based on the MCU but has some differences to it. It's basically my own Marvel Universe but based on the MCU.

Where did you get the boss/subordinate relationship from? I wrote it more like a partnership, don't know how you saw it as him being the subordinate. Also SHIELD's help isn't something you decline just because you're rich. SHIELD has ressources he can use, like intelligence or technology. Just because a character is rich doesn't make him able to handle anything alone. Even Batman needs Alfred, Lucius Fox, Justice League, his sidekicks,..., to just survive sometimes.