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Actually really fun to read! It's rather lighthearted so far, what with the MC being stronger than even the average New World pirates, and there's also quite a bit of canon divergence due to the MC not really giving a shit about it other than if it's something related to his crewmates. Writing quality is meh, but it's not too bad, still quite enjoyable to read through. So yeah, definitely give this a try if you're interested.
Nice, a new chapter! Great to see that Sanji is back and stronger than ever. Though, what exactly was going on between Luffy and Imu? Was it them making their presences known to each other? If so, then that could pose quite a problem for them. Still, it's not like it's an immediate concern. I really look forward to seeing how they handle the Grand Line, considering the changes. Thanks for the chapter!
Ok wow, this is honestly not bad for a Webnovel fic. Only complaint I have is that we're not getting enough worldbuilding, which is a shame since there are so many islands and people that canon has glossed over due to the nature of the Grand Line.
Because you are blatantly stealing from the authors who actually wrote these stories. You have not asked for, nor have you gained permission to repost these stories, so why the hell shouldn't I be mad when you're trying to brush off your attempts at plagiarism by portraying it as "spreading it to other platforms"?
Thing is though, I doubt Garp is gonna care much about testing him when one of his grandsons are about to die. Hell, one of the reasons why canon Luffy was able to punt him was because of his inner turmoil from choosing between his duty and his family, and considering willpower is a huge part of one's strength in OP, no wonder he was so weak at that moment.
It wouldn't be hard to figure out since she's already planning on fighting alongside him anyway. Besides, it's not like it's gonna matter when compared to what Whitebeard is likely gonna say when the war is about to end, maybe along with his life.
There's also a chance it might just inflate the prices too, but I don't think it matters that much anyway since he has enough power and people behind him to gather enough money to buy everything left on the store that he needs, like that one Eikon fruit that he didn't buy for some reason.
Oi, you're not fooling anyone with this shit. This fic was originally made by Kairomaru, and it's on AO3 & FFN. Stop stealing other people's works and actually write your own original story. This makes you nothing more than an untalented, lazy hack who can't be bothered to spend some time writing on a keyboard.
Basically just a snippet collection fic tbh. I expected way too much from a fic that doesn't know what direction it wants to go. Fuck, I've been wanting to read a fic with an MC that has Annihilation Maker for a while now, but I only see this garbage here. It's quite frustrating.
Ehh, it's not like they need a flamboyant name to induce fear and awe wherever they go. They're named the Straw Hat Pirates because of Luffy's moniker, after all. Besides, I feel like renaming would take away from what the crew is about, which is that they're all dreamers or people with ambitions, and the straw hat is symbolic of that because it's a promise from Luffy that he'll fulfill his dream.
It seems like it's gonna be a hard-fought battle for Luffy, which I'm glad for. He hasn't had such a hard battle ever since he fought against two admirals at once, and he's only gotten stronger since then. This will likely elevate his and his crew's strength immensely, which is quite a nice coincidence since they'll be going against the navy pretty soon. Thanks for the chapter!
Then again, this novel does have the Overpowered tag on it, so go nuts if you want. It'd be better if you don't take things too fast though.