when we are no longer able to change a situation, we are challenged to change ourselves.
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Consider adding more specificity to help the reader visualize the scene. What makes the air damp and putrid? Emphasis on Damp, putrid. shouldn't it be damp and putrud
Nice story, to the author, 'please update regularly'. Yeah I don't like Alec.
you can find this book on GoodNovel, the author updates more frequently on that platform. Here's the link https://m.goodnovel.com/book_info/31000495926/Billionaire/The-CEO's-secretary-?shareuser=52784475&ch=apps
I like the use of your punctuation make aside from that very clichè
it's very interesting