SirCalamitous
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SirCalamitous7hCommentéCh 4 Bait! baits?- SirCalamitous13hCommentéCh 45 The Nearly Maddened Han FengdetailBTTH: Starting With Auctioning Green Lotus Core FlameAnime et bandes dessinées · RebornAnew_author
- SirCalamitous16hCommentéCh 26 The New Day
- SirCalamitous22hCommentéCh 3 Domain expansion.
- SirCalamitous1dCommentéCh 25 The Night
- SirCalamitous1dCommentéCh 24 Back to the Farm
- SirCalamitous1dCommentéCh 64 Chapter 64 : Yun Che VS Karen l
- SirCalamitous1dCommentéCh 23 The Search
- SirCalamitous2dCommentéCh 22 After CDC
- SirCalamitous2dCommentéCh 21 End of CDC
- SirCalamitous2dCommenté
The story is good but the problem is that you write paragraphs and don’t split them up.
In the outskirts of the town, in an old factory they had setup their local base. The group entered the factory through gates that were open and there was no one watching the parameters. This made everyone feel tensed. Wolfe who didn't care at all until now also got tensed by the condition. As soon as they entered the factory, they saw a large number of arms (weapons), and trucks and jeeps empty. There was no one there. "What the hell? Where is everyone? There is no one here at all", Swift said the obvious. "Let's get out and see what happened here", Nichols said as he got out. Everyone got out except Wolfe who was tied to the jeep. "Hey, I won't run", Wolfe said looking at Lane signaling her to unlock his cuffs. "Yeah, you won't", said Swift provokingly and joined Nichols. Lane looked at him but didn't do anything and followed her team. They entered the factory where they had set up communication panel, to see why no one responded to the radio. Wolfe sat alone on the jeep playing with the cuffs and whistling carefree. Suddenly, a scream came from inside the factory alerting Wolfe. And soon, everyone came out running screaming, looking back time to time and formed a semicircle around the door. No, not everyone, Wolfe noticed the young technician was missing. Soon a herd of infected swarmed out of the door. They started firing. "Shoot the head. Shoot the head", Nichols said as the infected soldiers kept coming and falling after being shot. Suddenly, wolf noticed 3 infected coming out from the army truck and approaching the group. Wolfe screamed and tried to alert them but the gun sound overpowered his voice. Just as the infected was about to reach Lane, maybe she felt a presence or she heard him, she looked back. The infected had grabbed her arm by the time she noticed, she began preventing her arm being bit and lost balance falling on the floor. The formation broke. She hurriedly brought out her pistol and shot the infected and stood up to go back to formation but as she turned back she saw, Nichols and other soldier on her sight being bit and the infected couldn't be stopped anymore. They started backing down while continuing to shoot. The driver suddenly ran towards Wolfe and started the engine ready to leave the base. Swift also ran and sat on the front. Lane however had lost her footing and wasn't able to run. Wolfe extended his hand to her. She grabbed his hand and jumped with full force. Wolfe pulled her towards him successfully landing her on the back foot of the jeep. The jeep started and they quickly left the post. - SirCalamitous2dCommentéCh 4 Chapter 4 - Ten years later, Complete Activation of the system.
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- SirCalamitous3dCommentéCh 3 Chapter 3 - The other System holders and future plans.
- SirCalamitous4dCommentéCh 11 Mom.
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- SirCalamitous7dCommentéCh 30 Heading Off to Xiao ClandetailBTTH: Starting With Auctioning Green Lotus Core FlameAnime et bandes dessinées · RebornAnew_author
- SirCalamitous9dCommentéCh 11 Chapter 11: Agreement with Wang Hao
- SirCalamitous10dCommentéCh 9 Chapter 9: Frankly, I Hate Harassment
- SirCalamitous11dCommentéCh 7 Chapter 7: Suho kang vs Yu Ijin