It's already out my friend, thanks for the support 😊

author here! well 5star rating for mr since none gonna give 5stars. well it's my first novel so do give me any advjceyou say

Man, I must say I am now your fan your writing style plotting the story plot, everything it just feels awesome 10/10 from me recommend this one everyone should read this

Yo boy if you wanna rant go somewhere else and no one's asking for your power stone if you cant respect someone then get lost

I must say for a new author your work is remarkable though you say english is your third language and this novel may have many gramatical errrors but so far i haven't found one the phrases and sentence are fine and the choices of words too. As for the story it's hard to say since only 3 chapters are avaialable, though the start looks promosing hope it maintains the pace and don't give up in the middle of work. As for the writing style it can be improved further as its not much engaging plus the chapters are also short try to improve that.

hey did the author drop this? it was good though why :( .

a good one waiting for 100+ chapters after that gotta binge read. ..............................................................

Now, this is exciting waiting for chapters every week. I would say it's pretty good and you should give it a try. .........................

not good not too bad it was above average I would say. So, yeah you can give it a try it's not like it will take too much time reading it though.

one of the best novels I have read so far though it's really good and all but the chapters are really short... it just ends too soon maybe if chapters had a bit more words then it would have been great. Overall the novel is good I recommend it to all. (if you reading this review that is).

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thnx for the chapter

it's a pretty good novel I would say characters, story and plotline seems to be fine can't say it's extremely good but yeah it's better than your average ones so you should give it a try.

wasn't the development too fast like in 4hours she became his girlfriend

It's awesome I highly recommend this one as this is one of the best novels I have read so far. Currently, I am reading chapter 450 and it's surprisingly never tiring.