S_Palmer

don't start unnecessary between the couple. they just got married. I don't like the kidnapping part...it seems unnecessary

its a good novel, but the author does nit update often and I feel like the novel is going away from what it's actually about and into nonsense

I agree

the lack of updates is annoying at this point

the book is really good but it has alot of grammar problems. it just need to be edited

good read, just need to be edited. it alot of unnecessary words in some of the sentences.

good book, you just need to edit chapters because of grammar problems.

the book is really good. the characters are entertaining, but the grammar is really bad. the chapters need to be edited, but other than that, it's a good read.

I think you should get someone to edit the novel. there are too many grammar problems, and it's kind of hard to read.

too many grammar problems. overall, it's a good read. It just needs to be edited.