Pagla_Pro

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I am astonished how these kinds of fics get these much power stones. Truly, the world is ruled by edgelords.

+1

I always prefer a single set of power, but strong. Like Superman. Too many powers in a single bodu ruins the growth of the character.

Just a tip: People want to see loyal characters in a protagonist pirate crew, like Zorro. Not a morally uptight, righteous kind of guy. Even though the latter one is good for the world; in a fanfiction, loyality trumps every other thing.

You just spoke my mind. Thank you.

It's getting hard to read. A sick twisted mc! Just kill her or leave her. He is not attracted to her. So why is he tagging her along? Just to torture her? Repititive actions ruin the story.

Finally an author intelligent enough to pick Starkiller as SI.

This Felicia plot seems too forced. Nate is becoming unlikeable every chapter. This fic is becoming too complex to keep track on. I'm out.

I really like the way this fic is progressing. The writing quality is quite well imho. Hopefully this will be completed.