Shi_Wu

pretty mid-bad but its not a complete garbige

translation is rly good BUT Story itself and mc are completle garbige. not worth of reading

there is higher % that your Child will be kage when you yourself are an kage (and at least elite jonin), kakashis stamina thing is uhhhh ye in 4th war he somehow had crazy ammout of it but i wonder what kind of training did he do during time skip to get like 10x stronger... and its widely known fact that Kakashi was strongest jonin in konoha at beggining of Naruto series (aside of kage) obv we saw guy and root being stronger later on but thats just cuz of Shippuden power scaling. and we have like no idea how much chakra do civilian ninjas have... only civilian ninjas chakra level we can asume are Minato and Sakura whom are both kage. also i think it was just narutos chakra control that was disturbed by 9tails and not its ammout... and in general we dont have any numbers or values of anyones chakra but asuming that Uzumaki have 100x chakra is just Wild as they whould never lose an war... like they could just spam super op combination jutsus... like lets say that there was 500 uzumakis in their village who were at their combat peak... thats chakra value of 50 000 ppl and not to even mention their insane stamina and recovery speed... in worst scenario they could just brute Force their way out of there with minimal causalities... hell if singe one of them just rushed to enemies and exploder his chakra via some forbidden technique it whould be powerfull enought to destroy moon or some shiz (like in movie where 30? jonins could fire canon to destroy moon)

they dont rly need to be stronger than him... being stronger than most of heroes and villains is enought

welp he isnt lightnig speed but light speed which is thousands times faster... its stated in databooks (which are supperior to any common sense) naruto have same power lvl creep as Dragon Ball... if there was one more arc after 4th war they whould be destroying dimensions

... frost giants have just high resistence against cold but they can still get frozen by Casket or someone powerfull enought so cold immunity is still smting much needed. as for Caskets immense power... we never saw it, its just hear-say... Hella sayd its weak so doubt its strong enought to make someone into god-king level that aside ice ice fruit whould still add extreme versitality such as better control over ice or ability to turn onself into ice

also missleading title... mc just gains all powers of shanks (and more) stacked up with Uzumaki Bloodline and haki cultivation (completly uncalled for bs) at once. He is in his 60s (combining his Shanks and ilr expirience that is... he should be at least 100 if we combine all of it) but he act like dumb edgy kid who like to date 10 y.o. and dont mind corrupting her mind to point of completly loseing childhood innocence and becoming psycho

ye... its pretty bad.. like i whould like to give it 2 stars but even that is too much for unoriginal wishfullfilment novel with no plotline whatsoever... like maybe if it was just that i might still give you those 2 stars but even tho grammer is decent your text as whole is badly written and you repeat yourself and spam same words (like when you start every second paragraphs "Now you", it was like 5x in single chap...) aside of this its just boring wall of text that dont move plot into any direction (i am on chap 13 and it feels like i am on chap 3 at max)... and for love of god dont let me start with that bullshit of cultivation you added... i whould like to give this book negative review as its that bad... even chinesse mtl have better plot, system and power levels

uhm i know some stuff about naruto and i dont remembre anyone saying that Uzumaki have 100x chakra ... pretty sure you mistake it for when kakashi sayd that kyubi have 100x his own chakra. as for CA 8-10x chakra buff on full Uzumaki Bloodline... even that seems lil too much (keep in mind that Naruto was jinchuriki and both of his parents were kage lvl so he isnt an example for ordinary Uzumaki)

this sounds like pure chatGPT