Thanathos27

No. In case that it was writen in german I could have helped. Sorry for bothering you.

It is not my cup of tea. The writing style seems out of the mind of a teenage edgelord wanting his 'waifus'. So if any like it, than so be it.

Is the way it's writen like by s horny 15 year old edge lord from a non-english speaking country? I don't know where the Author is from but this is what I thought of the writing style.

Ah, so that's why I don't trust the mc.

Who? The trio or MC?

It could also function like Gaia's scream. In Baki, Gaia's scream was able to parallel people for a few moments.

That is what I've been thinking the whole time. Like why do I need to hear it every fifth or so chapter.

Wrong fandom but good luck with that.

This chapter felt too forced for me.

yes its about my Avatar fanfic. I have to be honest, I liked Avatar as a kid but now I saw it multiple times and it doesn't make me feel the same way. So, as to still honor it, I wanted to ask if you knew of someone who could bring this fanfic justice?