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Basically, the game is an FPS where characters have abilities. The lore is basically from season trailers and stuff. Negatives may vary, but for omen (teleporting dude that can also summon hollow shadow spheres for cover and temporarily blind anyone in a straight line for some metres) is hinted to he in pain as his body is barely holding together. Jett, another agent with wind based flying powers, also seems to have caused a disaster when she awakened her powers.

You're doing great, Author! As someone already mentioned, you can't please everyone. Also, you'll keep getting better as you write, so unless you want to keep making revisions, it might be better to tell a good story. Your next one will be better anyway.

CHUTES and ladders??? I grew up with SNAKES and ladders, but honestly, chutes make so much more sense in the context of the game.

*story Damn... Started my review with a typo 😅

The stey is well written and has me hooked. Chapters are longer than many I've seen and don't blindly conform to Canon, like many fics do. The plot is moving along at a steady pace, and I hope the author keeps up the great work. Give it a read.

Great story and is well written. The MC is actually a good hero (like Superman), and unlike what many would think about someone with his powers, he still has his own struggles. Do give it a read and kudos to you, Author!

Unless all this arguing is a setup, there are actually people who eat before brushing? I mean no offense, it's just that on my part of the world that seems so... weird.

Spider-Man: Fake Red by Yusuke Osawa I think it was cancelled, but it captures the essence of Spider-Man. Do give it a try.

The author is just kidding or is a psychopath if this is what he writes for self-indulgence. I read that false advertising comment and jumped in, expecting a funny, OP MC story and got jumped with the feels. Anyways, the author writes well, and it's shaping up to be a good story, so I hope you all give it a try.