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The only way I can describe this novel is the best “bad” novel. It isn’t of a high quality if you go by normal standards but I still find myself enjoying it none the less. You won’t be blown away or anything but it is still a good read if your bored.

For the gif? Idk, I clicked the gif thing at the bottom and searched for it. Sorry man

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I Will say this to start, I’m not very far into the book yet, but it is already one of the best “system” novels I’ve read. Most novels with a system are really generic with no substance to them, and whilst this is in no way a masterpiece on the level of Moby Dick, it is very high quality in terms of doing what is supposed to do, which is being a casual read with relatively easy to digest action and a bit of, for a lack of a better word, face-slapping(?). Anyways, it’ good at what it try’s to do, and that’s about all you could ask of a novel. The only complaint is that, whilst there aren’t any typos, the grammar is pretty bad.

I’m sorry, but claiming the reason for that abomination of an arc existing is because your “human and make mistakes” is ridiculous. I say for five minutes before writing this and I LITERALLY CANNOT THINK OF A SINGLE REDEEMABLE WUALITY. You bring in Lolicon and shotacon for no purpose other than because you felt like it and you made a FUCKING WEEBVILLE! I genuinely refuse to believe you didn’t know how bad this was gonna turn out while you were writing it. THE ENTIRE ARC IS YOU JUST DEGRADING THE MC AND INTRODUCING CRINGE FOR THE SALE OF CRINGE. How you managed to do all of that (and so much more that I can’t be bothered to write about the rest) and then pin it on being “human and making mistakes” actually baffles me.

Great novel, but sadly it’s ending was very rushed and, quite frankly, absolutely dogshit. I hate the ending for so many reasons that I couldn’t list them all if I tried.