RaygonWolf

Thanks, glad your enjoying the novel

Finally reached 100 chapters. Thank you to everyone has read so far.

Thank you for giving my novel a read. I appreciate any support I'm given.

Hello I am the author of this book and I thought I'd give a review so that people who are thinking about reading this novel have a rough idea of what they getting. The first thing I want to mention is that I am rather new to writing so my first few chapters aren't masterpieces of any sought. I have however tried my best to edit mistakes as well as make what I've written understandable, but if you happen to see anything you don't understand or you see any errors feel free to let me know and I'll edit them as quickly as possible. Now, what kind of novel is this. This novel is going to be relatively slow-paced as I want to properly develop the characters and make the world feel alive instead of just being based on the mc. When it comes to romance I will probably have quite a few possible matches for the main character, however, this doesn't mean the main character will be with them. I hope to make the romance seem as realistic as possible instead of the mc suddenly being in a relationship with someone. This will mean there will be a possibility of multiple relationships, but I haven't completely decided on this yet. If you have any questions about the novel feel free to comment on this review or comment within one of the chapters and I will try my best to reply. Hope you enjoy my novel

Hello I've been writing this novel for a little bit now and was wondering if any readers could let me know if there is anything I need to improve on so that I can make the novel better.

Longer chapter. Hope you enjoy.

The two souls are separate but they went back in time together. I won't say any more than that or it will spoil the story

Thanks for the input. Hopefully it reads a bit better now

Just think, if he put all stats into strength he could make a tiny one punch man

I've tried to fix it, hopefully its more readable