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Or concubine harem:- Primas2dRépondu à Primas
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that many things any only got f****** kiss
When he opened his eyes in panic, he was met with the pink irises of Kyouka Uzen, the chief of the seventh MDF unit, who was kissing him on the lips while sitting in his lap - if that was not already evident. - Primas4dCommenté
yes
want a sequel? - Primas4dCommenté
idiotic to show the woman your pig
It's so idiot to show this kind of pig expression to girl's and women's. - Primas5dCommenté
no
[2. No, definitely not] - Primas5dCommenté
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'no..he was improving mid battle...this...Naruto's talent is way off that chards!!' shikamaru thought deep - Primas5dRépondu à Primas
it not i
"That's the skill of the greatest ninja believe it!" Naruto said as ino made a ugly face"yeah sure" - Primas5dRépondu à Taro
it was fine has before please, please do nooooot translate i
"That's the skill of the greatest ninja believe it!" Naruto said as ino made a ugly face"yeah sure" - Primas5dRépondu à Himank_Gosain
do you even need to say anything
"WOW!!! NARUTO-KUN HAS BECOME HOT..HES SO HANDSOME....MORE HANDSOME THEN SASUKE-KUN!" girls yelled in union as they get a cold stare from hinata as Naruto walked towards hinata and said"can I sit here" - Primas6dCommenté
thanks for the story of yours because it is interesting it is in the same old way many of the authors have been writing the story but if you completed or try to complete it in a good way I am not even joking, lots and lots of peoples are going to read your story if you do not leave the story in the middle
Ch 14 Chapter 13: Hella joins the game - Primas7dPosté
if you are trying to copy somebody else is work change as many things as you can because if you are adding your countries style or any other countries style with the name on it you are looking like a fool because maximum of the words in the story is based on Chinese stories where they get power from nothing and then became something beyond the mortals comprehension and then they forget the top the UN got their power they drive don't even try to forget the top the UN got their power they drive don't even think about how do they got their system
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what the f*** is he talking about in this line , what is b–car
"You bastard, why didn't you kill you bastard? Driving a B-car is amazing, isn't it, ah? Deliberately splashing dirty water from the roadside on my son?" - Primas7dCommenté
it's speeding not to walking for a car
"Everyone really has it now." Priya said angrily as he looked at the Lamborghini, who was walking away. - Primas7dCommenté
oh you gender has changed from man to a woman and he is the little sister himself
"Aren't you talking nonsense, of course?" Aryan looked at Priya seriously. After all, Aryan is now a stupid sister, and they depend on each other. - Primas7dCommenté
I think you should forgot your story because everything I'll think in the story is Chinese based I don't have a problem with their story the problem is if you are trying to copy somebody else work or translating that work to make it your own change the things which maximum people will not like here making this story from Indian perspective than change the chopsticks to spoon and don't use the Chinese peoples name and their don't understand what they are you talking about
"Hey, just kidding." Aryan sneered, opened the Coke, picked up his chopsticks, and started to eat breakfast.