Primas

you don't have to speed up the things , I mean I also love the way you are using your care to interact with it's on and we love some comedy slice of life to interactive scenario where can men character talks to people in normal way or get into Amul with it you know the normal stuff that happens in comic and stories it's really good and I like it a lot that's why should I have to change it just do what do you think is right in a good way that will not affect your story that's all who I am not writing bye my hand so if you find any mistakes please don't make fun of it

your grammar is beyond understand

yes just break him you don't have to change his gender

how did she come to this conclusion of magic he did not even say that

what does the ask him for him means

this line does not apply to human being because if he becomes absolute perfect invincible being then he is not a human being because not a single man or a woman can be a absolute being either they have to combine to become a that being or every f****** human being should come together and make a beam that as every skill and talents but any intelligent life on earth will have or should have then that will be the perfect be in human standards

I have one question for f****** author, does nobody see you but who is she or your imagination is that strong that you don't even want to think but some normal will recognize her will take some kind of pictures of something and their hortic life will become more care because they how Mach she is real the government will take action something like that and their left will be in danger that would have been a great option but you don't think, and if the system is that strong why can't you just normally we want some kind of action but you are not giving it and there is not even a some kind of normal fantastic story it just getting boring now you are just speaking this serious thing again and again story get interesting if they are some security going on in story only then readers will like this story, for the way you writing your story it's like you don't even want to try or you don't want to overload your brain

good he deserved it

that's a good thing for you if you are first priority is to lose your virginity then your whole existence is just f*** the story in itself and if everybody thinks that it losing your virginity is a good thing or is necessary when you are 17 16 or 13 12 whatever, then you all are f***** up in brain