Richardoz

erhhh... not in this war... that's all I'll say.

The premise is a bit cliché, but it's not bad at all, what I would ask for is that the writing be improved, it's a little confusing in the first chapters (I only read it up to chapter 5 for now)

It remains to be seen, I don't have a specific one, but if I'm undecided after finishing the Holy Grail War, I'll ask for suggestions.

I just realized after digging deeper into the world of Fate... it's complicated, the brutal information it has, besides what is shown in the anime. It's complicated, the whole universe itself, it's even a little scary to know that right now there is a beast that could end the planet if it woke up. No, I think I'll reconsider continuing to write Fate, I'll only do it up to Fate Zero, or maybe up to ten years later, well, I had planned to change the Holy Grail War ten years later, making it totally different, but with everything I found on the internet, I'm considering finishing Fate Zero alone.

You're right, thanks for telling me.

I haven't thought about it yet, whether to make it a harem or just one. Well, the reason is simple, some people don't like harems, while others do, so I'll think about it when I get to that point.

I didn't notice, so I fixed it already...

You're right, it's much easier with "." I'll use it for the following chapters.

At that time, I translated it literally, word for word, now that I read it again... it sounds weird hahaha

The raw is terribly bad, I don't like how the names of the characters change all the time, and the fight scenes, for example. Akaza's doesn't make you fully immerse yourself in it because the Chinese words get lost in translation.