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A good work, but it still has few chapters, so I won't make a deeper analysis, but the descriptions are deep, the dialogs are nice, the script is very instigating and the protagonist who has a huge future...
Look, I have two points to highlight in my review. First - The pace is very good, especially at the beginning. Nothing seems to get dragged and when I think the good parts are over, the story amends into another very good flow. Second - The syntax is not the best I've ever read, but it still remains good for them and well understood. Finally, I recommend you read this work this, because it is already very good, and I look forward to seeing how it will be in the future when you have more fame.