Kono_Dio_na

erm, this reasoning was a bit dumb tbh. it would be better if he took a path as a composer instead. after all, it was an income for his future family. although it was just copied from another world, he did compose the instruments by himself nonetheless.

fk. did i said ai? i didn't! robotic doesn't mean your writing is ai. let me add it, it feels stiff. it seems off. the writing could be better, especially in the match interview, tv commentary, n newspapers. why didn't you read my review properly first before you jump into ur conclusion.

if i skimmed it, would i even bother to read for 2-3 days? the author wrote novels, and the reader reviewed them. if the readers didn't explain enough when they didn't give a full rating, the author would not be content and even overreacting, saying rude things to the reviewers. if the author couldn't accept calmly, they should stop writing novels on this platform.

yeah, the author didn't accept your criticism either, just like my review just now. instead of trying to be a bit creative, the author just replied rudely

if you can't accept criticism, why bother posting it? why r u so overreacting? as an author, u r too rude

actually i found this work on an mtl site. i didn't pay attention at that time. it turns out that this work is a hidden gem.

i bet, the three are these guys

good start, but then Chinese this, Chinese that, Chinese namba wan. it's too annoying tbh