YellowTzyy

you're novel suck. 4/10 dissatisfied.you're mc is a Slave system hahaha. dropped this novel of your work. you're a horny japanese like to watch porn but a naive Mc. ewwww

maybe you're a Virgin for real life too. that you include yourself to it! hahahaha. you just a like any author in Japanese.

ughhh.. you're being realistic to your Author.

yeah I know how it's feels man. how ironic Imr? system in the Sucks and Ironic hahaha.

I feel like the author. you are the Mc of this Story that you made. think about it. the Mc way to unprofessional being. because of the Past. the way he's acting like a Immature being. You are in the urban and Modern world not in the Chinese novel. haiyyaaa. I feel bad for Chloe. not just is mouth are hurtful. but she's a child or little sister. we have some different circumstances situation. I hope you're Mc more become a character development not like this. you know what's in the future and suddenly. I don't know anymore. you don't have super power. you're just a Normal Regressor that's want to correct the past. not entirely correct the world. but yourself.

So much dumb info. Like a naive ninja this character like Naruto bs. So simp that he not killed the tiger so that rin will not despair. Yoy U author so soft to this world. A culvator world be always be ruthless and Gore more. Not a like Japanese anime pffff

YES more!!! Evolves then become a Supreme God and Kill the world's will and The Oversees. HAHAHAHA make a divine Realm. Make a Country more battle of God's more evolution HAHAHAHA.

I hope If you can do a 6 chapter a week. That will be great. If not it's fine.

I'm glad. Just don't drop off this. I like to have your own story too.

Hey I like your story, it's like a Epic of Caterpillar made by PancakeWitch. I like how your power is like Rimuru devour skill I hope you can holder the Son of Gluttony "Beelzebub". And more harem not just many. Like Keriena like 40 wife to have more. Please.. Thank you and I hope this continues in the future!! May have bless your health first anything else. How write to your heart content and improve so that this your novel maybe in the manhwua or Manga.