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No no , I have to agree . This story truly don’t make any sense even for a twilight fanfic . I’m only still reading because I’m bored .

2 strike , one more strike and I’m dropping it. It’s freaking England not China .

Great chapter , however small grammar tip. I notice that you keep omitting (the) in a sentence . Please fix that . It will make your grammer a whole lot better .

Well I don’t mind it, any golden finger would be fine . There so much hate for system. I honestly find them enjoyable if the system is only a status screen that you can add points too.

Sigh , don’t know how I feel .

Sigh , seriously. If the novel is good , you don’t need to do this . 🤷‍♂️

Ehhh, I don’t know how I feel about this . I like the choice system. But was it really smart to bring one piece powers/fruit into the Naruto world as the first reward/gift package . For me personally, I have to look up any one piece info . So that’s a immersive killer. But I’m still willing to read it.