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2021-07-31 JointBulgaria
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    Figil2 months ago
    Répondu à Raj_Shah_7152

    Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. I guess you're right that I'm looking for something more specific, but only the writer can create his desires as he wants, so I comply and read even things that I partially like, for example the comedy-parody elements in your novella I like as and the theme. You have very good ideas, for that I also gave a high rating in my opinion, my main criticism is in the realism. For example, the father, who is a top agent, a person of enormous benefit to his country, is not given a place on the ship. Secret agents, intelligence services, are the people who hold the real power in our world, literally a CIA, KGB, MI6, Mossad, is a state within a state, they will always put themselves before other units in the administration, they also have the means to enforce . To put it this way, it would be logical that he had a ticket in the highest class in the ship and possibly sent 2 such for his children . Therefore, if he was some anarchist, terrorist, radical, he would be more suited to the character you describe.

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    Figil2 months ago
    Répondu à BL00DY

    It is relatively readable, it is a pity that it has potential, but the author stumbles heavily towards clichés and there is a lack of logic in many situations. I prefer not to write more than a few chapters per day, but if necessary 3-4 per week, but to consider them seriously.

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    Figil2 months ago
    Répondu à Dreaming_Nobody

    There are so many illogical moments in the novel that we cannot help but be critical. The author does not delve into the reasoning at all, and he clearly lacks knowledge of human nature. Otherwise, the story is interesting and the comic moments keep me reading it, but it's not something I'll remember like Reverend Insanity is.

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    Figil2 months ago
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    My opinion is based on about 350 chapters read. In many places, there is a lack of logical sequence, tense and rushed situations, lack of realism. It seems that the relatively original basis of the story is full of clichés that we have seen in other novels. I don't know why the authors think that when the story is not written in the best light for the main character, it will not be liked by the audience, I would say the opposite is people like different. Reverend Insanity is the model to follow, of flawed but realistic characters who screw up, their loved ones die, and their reasoning can be quite illogical. I skipped almost all the chapters where there were secondary and tertiary characters. I am not saying that it is the author's fault that he widens the horizons he describes in order to enrich the color of the novel. But the inability to create living images in our consciousness is noticeable, since in their very genesis they resemble each other and their characters are very superficially described. I will recommend the author to read, the most colorful and diverse fantasy series that even lacks the concept of a main character, Steven Erickson's Malazan Book of the Dead.

  • Figil
    Figil2 months ago
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    To write a novel that is based on a historical real story, you need to be familiar with a lot of facts, a way of thinking 100 years ago. in the specified region, etc. Just from your first 6 chapters, I can see that you are completely unfamiliar with relationships in Europe, let alone one of the strictest societies. There are enough materials, novels, analysis, etc. that you can build a credible image, but you decided to do it based on One Piece. In chapter 5, in the scene where the main character shows enviable shooting skills, the father begins to swear, absolutely illogical and inappropriate even for the lowest stratum of society. This scene resembles a corporal in today's U.S. Army greeting a private who has gone astray. The German army is of a completely different model, and there was no such behavior there until the fall of Hitler.

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    Figil5 months ago
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    Top system with the assumption that somewhere around 100 chapters, we will already have the greatest cultivator. Unfortunately, the main character cannot think of asking the system to take the necessary energy from the mines it finds and directly reach the final point ... No irony ... elementary plot !

  • Figil
    Figil5 months ago
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    After the 300th chapter, the realism decreases and the level of the novel drops. In general, it begins to describe illogical situations, fabricated without much thought. When you're in the harsh world of cultivation, it doesn't make sense to share secrets with near-strangers, pursue adventures that only bring you risks, and radically change your behavior from the initial chapters. Giving away what level alchemist you are puts you in a situation where they can kidnap you to use your talent, showing wealth that is beyond your level is also not recommended.

  • Figil
    Figil6 months ago
    Répondu à Daoistm3tUvp

    It is not until the 150th chapter, and there are no indicators that it will change, but there is an indication of some romantic thread.

  • Figil
    Figil6 months ago
    Répondu à JustMovingAlong

    This is not a reason to give it such a low rating, there are plenty of other positives :). Otherwise, I am most annoyed when in some novels they start mentioning the name of the main character every second line, an indicator of low literary culture.

  • Figil
    Figil6 months ago
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    I would say a pretty decent novella, I like how it develops the character gradually and alchemist the content. It would be nice if the author focused on the qualities of the main character, for example creating new alchemical recipes, making more order elixirs for the powerful in this world, for example they have to return a favor. My opinion is based on the 150 chapters read so far. One of the big downsides of all system novels is that the main characters have no qualities beyond the "golden finger".