HabitualChaos
My purpose in writing is to have fun and explore ideas that interest me.
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HabitualChaosa year agoCommentéI can't imagine an "ordinary" level 98 Duoluo.
- HabitualChaosa year agoRépondu à Sumeet_K
Canon
- HabitualChaosa year agoCommenté
John seems Tony boss right now
- HabitualChaosa year agoCommenté
I feel that, like robots speaking. In the last conversation in this chapter, Tony Stark never could speak like a real estate seller, maybe if was his own house, but he could speak with jokes. If you want him to help the MC, you can include Tony asking for Jarvis to find a house based in the MC cementers. Perhaps you should search about the characters' voices, for writing a voice more similar to each character. Please, consider a positive comment. I wish the best and keep going!
- HabitualChaos2 years agoRépondu à Zetsway
She would use Assembly (-:
- HabitualChaos2 years agoRépondu à carrotpie
Maybe food and monitoring.
- HabitualChaos2 years agoCommenté
I had read "edgy" ashashash
- HabitualChaos2 years agoCommenté
Be careful with the pronouns, as Spencer is a man you need to use "his" and "he". Your work is so good, thanks for the chapter! :-)
- HabitualChaos2 years agoRépondu à mythoscribe
Who is Lana Rhodes? It's an OC?
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - HabitualChaos2 years agoRépondu à hezjz
Can I clean here?
