Zucchi

oh man, is this gonna be the party where Felicia gets drugged and assaulted right? but for harem's sake she is probably gonna get saved

i know it's been 5 months but this dude is already training with guns?

fun fact: when concrete absorbs moisture (if you didn't know, that's what it does to harden) it can cause chemical burns on human skin. so if for example if your buried in a tub of concrete then you can die of the burn before you can suffocate

I'm gonna need more of this story immediately my man

a better way of writing that would be "Bah Dum"

the story overall is pretty decent, but it can be a little inconsistent at times. I will not elaborate.

Symbiotes won't use energy like that naturally unless they copy it from a host (unless Prime can because he is special and you just didn't say anything). symbiotes like Venom for example are usually used like living power armor to protect and enhance the host in every physical sense. that's also why you see symbiotes make weapons from their body like Carnage and Riot did in the movies because their abilities at birth are purely physically based

dude, "covered in Prime's energy"??? you're using the wrong descriptors for him enhancing her as a symbiote

white hair? I thought it was blonde??