this whole sentence is full of mistakes

it would've been much better if she transformed into her bug form then learned to change into her humanisk form later.

so foxy bel is not there anymore ?

my guy first off let's make one thing clear the Gil you're using isn't from any fate series and if you want to bring fate extra gil then let me tell you this, that form he got was because of two things the mystic code and the moon cell and even then it was only accessable one time and the world was digital in nature, so yes it's a pointless argument. secondly any real type moon fan would tell you that nasuverse and power scaling are like oil and water you can't take anything said at face value for example Ea in the description they wrote anti-world but that term is used lously as it probably meant by world the earth or reality marbles as they are categorized as worlds, small ones but worlds non the less, anything more then that and you get to fanon territory as really the only beings that follow the descriptions you made of your gil from fate are maybe ,archetypes maybe, chaos and most likely void shiki.. PS: the only thing I'll give it to you is his sha naqba imuru which makes him all knowing. PPS: I know I may seem like I hate Gil with how I portrayed him here But I actually love his character but I still won't give him more then what he disserves power wise .

that's why it's magic.

what??? he doesn't see the need? he would get bored otherwise? he can contend with most beings of the marvel universe ?? my guy are you speaking of the same universe where multiversal if not omniversal threats can happen any day where time travel and alteration is as easy as breathing for some of those beings. I admit Gil can certainly confront some of them but that is strictly speaking the og one not this carbon copy one and even then the og one wouldn't foolish enough that he wouldn't use it considering his and his people's circumstances .

so his eyes don't work then if he can't even see those events before they happen.

well I guess that's something, this kinda of relationship isn't really that interesting and I prefer the og relationship between them but I see this is the one that you enjoy more author .

oh right you should know this, Gilgamesh can actually fly.

you should know that vimana could reach the speed of light easily .

his eyes are yellow man

do Gods feel hunger?

can't she sense his divinity since she's a demi-God herself and since she has the blessings of the 13 Olympians she should be able to sense his similarity to DC Apollo .

really man? is this what you meant when you said that it won't happen in a while ? cause I wanna know if these unrealistic and uninteresting romance scènes will continue to happen so that I won't have to still keep reading .

more dialogue man, I know these days authors are too lazy or not creative enough so they use AI but at least use more dialogue and interactions so that the fic seem less dead and uninteresting .

you need to work on the grammar more boss

fix the pov switchs man, in the same paragraph you switch from I to he in every sentence.

I wouldn't call this creative cursing to be honest .

there's a repeat here mate

Well just came out of nowhere and for no apparent reason.