Blast_Niro

nah this screams AI trash man.

all I'm seeing here is Gary sue in the making.

So he doesn't have an American name? I thought all asians need to have an American sounding name when they live in America?

but then why is his full government name japanese?

wait? why did he have a Japanese name in his past life if he wasn't japanese?

Oh well sorry then bro, but the way write feels so much like an AI wrote that it's uncanny.

dude why use chatgpt if you didn't even try to make it seem like you at least put some effort in writing it?

sorry dude but having the paragraphs in each chapter be that long is annoying to read, if you had read any fanfic here even trash ones they always have the paragraphs separated which makes it easy to read and enjoy but yours is the total opposite which is a shame as the story seemed interesting.

I respect that you are trying to get better using AI I really do, but with how AI is used a lot on this app when I see those words used my enjoyment just drops my guy and it gets replaced by annoyance.

yo, please tell me this isn't made with chatgpt man cause "reflecting" and "complexity" are a dead giveaway.