SubMortal

Real Review: Perfect Writing Qualty, Cliff hanger heaven, Perfect everything. except how much leveling up took place. (Author comMented Under my Comment and asked me to read. i don’t have a problem with that.) I LOVE the writing style. The quAlity is perfect, its going to take a lot of out of you to spot a spelling or grammatical erRor. I LOVE THE CHARACTER RELATIONSHIPS AND DYNAMIC. The conversations In this novel feels Alive and fluid in a way. in fact that’s why I countinued reading despite slow Leveling. CLIFFHANGERS. The cliffs are really high and steep. I cOuldn’t stop reading. TROPES AND TONES. The author really outdone him/herself with the themes in this novel such as Betrayal, appearance vs reality, Magical Realism, and More. small fixable probLem (why not 5 starS yet) : This novel has but one problem alone. And that problem is the System Development. There is only a little bit of leveling up as of the first 50 chapters. Not that I have a problem with that at all, I kind of like that. But there are some thIrsty Kids around here Looking for crazy leveling up, and I mean, System is tag here so…yeah. I’m sure that problem would be fixed later. The author was apparently trying to set up other themes so that’s why The mc only gets strong fast after the 50 chapters. you should definitely check this one out. i like it a lot and would continue reading. Review will update as I read more chapters.

Disclaimer: THIS IS NOT A FAKE REVIEW, but many others are. There is NOTHING bad about this novel at all. I think it should be above MVS. I’ve read 500+ plus and it’s the only novel here on this site that I’m going to continue after reading this much. Good work, author. You’re the best (popular) book on this site.

Good novel. Lots of fake reviews. Stop it. But good work nonetheless. Don’t know what to say. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑🤭😑😑🤭😑😑😑🤭

Take*

Wasted 600 chapters of my life reading this. I loved the dynamic between the characters, and the vampire stuff. As the author said, you didn’t really see MALE vampire novels until this one came first. So many novels are copying this because of the BIG BOOM it’s had. All I can say is that the dynamic is great, but can be a little Fake at times. The character arcs are a little faulty. The typos is what stopped me from reading. I don’t blame JKS though. It’s the thirsty readers who want authors to do 1-5 chapters a day when actual books TaKes their time. It was a good experience reading, but all the faults (I didn’t go through them) make it a trash novel compared to an actual published novel.

People need to read GOOD novels and stop reading trash. This is an example of a good novel. The writing—everything is really good. I LOVE Kingdom building so that’s a plus. Just read the thing.