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The prophecy states that either Voldemort or Harry will die to each others hand, not who will win. This means his changing things could end up with Harry losing. Fate doesn’t pick sides between good and evil so Voldemort winning is very much a possibility. Not to mention that even if Harry does win, others could die along the way. In the books it was really only Fred or George and lupin that I can remember dying besides like dumbledore and snape. Overall Harry came out of the battle of hogwarts very lucky if we consider it realistically. The mc’s introduction into the storyline could effect things just enough to change that very lucky outcome. The flaps of a butterfly’s wings can create a hurricane on the other side of the world, and that is what can happen here.

Thank you! I forgot to edit that out

Should be fixed, thanks for pointing it out!! I really appreciate the help

Not sure why it showed up like that, it was meant to be an elipses (…). I’ll see what I can do to fix that

He is weak and pathetic. He’s a first year. He’s eleven, at least physically. If you want a main character who is dumbledores level in the first 20 chapters find something else. Also, it’s a good transition to what I have planned next.

Just got off a 10 hour shift but I’ll see what I can do, I’ve got some ideas!

Thanks! Fixing it now

Of course! Still working on this one, I just have a lot of other ideas and I’m wondering which one I should try writing on the side

Continuing either way, but might start another one too

That’s an interesting idea, maybe I’ll implement it in a future fic