GaZe_Zero

Good stuff, I am still excited to see what powers he got from the VK. Also I’m wondering if he will prefer to be known as the Vampire King or Ice Prince

Good chap, I’m kind of excited for him to become known as the Vamp King in OOO, maybe even meet Billy who try’s to kill him. Also with the supplies he is going to have to get that fear out of their minds or else it’ll cripple humanity, and let’s be honest we all love a strong human society.

Good stuff, I truly get it. I do hope these comments give you some inspiration or motivation like they did for me. I also hope to see his powers finally explained that were hinted at so long ago.

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A really good fic, and one of the best RWBY Self-Insert ones out there. Author really cares about reviews and actually responds to feedback. Highly recommend due to world building, keeping to canon, and appropriate depictions of characters

Looking forward, he thing I like about your writing is that you use lore and stick close to the story, keep it up

I think this is a great Rwby fic, but the one major issue I have is how ahead Ruby is portrayed. Even if she time traveled back in time by one year, she would just be an average student and not so far ahead, as in the actual show most of her time was spent catching up to current students. Also her combat style being as good as Pyrrha and overpowering Glynda is not possible following the Rwby timeline, and is just narrowly possible if it was volume 9 Ruby. Really author has buffed Ruby up too much, and instead of focusing more on plot and changing stuff through actions, they focus on powering Ruby up enough to deal with it.

Surprised me when my very rare check ups on webnovel led to me finding a favorite fic from another site being posted. One of the only SI/OC She Ra fics, well written, fun, and the gamer system is op but scales with everything else in the story. Good OCs and exploration with world building. Really solid gamer fic, one of like two that I follow.

Hmmm might might, tbh not explored so it’s a possibility

Sry for late update, college and COVID hit at same time, will probably be a few but chap is half done