I know I was rude Wich I am sorry for I am a Grammer nerd and I hate Grammer errors if you need help fixing the Grammer I would help since I think your book has potential

I highly doubt English isn't your frist language the way you cary your words is definitely is American English. The reason I was writing this is because it seemed like a good find but the Grammer just annoyed me. this is because all new novels on this site are written by kids who can't write properly.