WulfricTheodore

pretty meh, but for a legacies/tvd/originals fanfic, its an okay read. but like them, ut has glaring flaws, too much bashing (landon's to be exact, especially when their is no point to, because writers wrote him to be hope's elena and he did surpass her in terms of usability/character.) breaking the world power structure by introducing too much bs. it should have been like instead of becoming op, she needed to get points by changing/not changing the story and when she completes the world, then she can jump, not by being a wish fullfillment wannabe. its not as bad as introducing lucifer in tvd, lie what the hell, writer should just say it out loud he is trying to compensate for his nonexistent d**k. another problem is fmc's existence is kinda pointless other than f**king hope since plot remains the same(ish), no creativity. i short, if you have nothing to read, this fic wont be the last thing on the list, but, don't expect much (which i did seeing the lack of some other flaws, 1 star reviews or just the effort author put in writing words.) while on that note, author doesn't proofread enough to remove the redundancy in his words/sentences.

author i don't know if you know but someone (i_am_not_done) has started copy pasting this novel's content in his, called, Echhi Girl: Reincarnated with big lemons/melons, i forgot the last word of the title. check it out, the thief has sink his teeth into first three chapters already, and guess what even the chapters has same names as yours, much less the content.

blatant copy paste of another novel. shame! here is your spit of shame.

let's just say author is on drugs. that's me being extremely nice and courteous. my image of author sama

reverse flash can't die, he is a paradox, whenever one dies other know why one of them died, and who killed them, and they will come to take revenge something current mc is far from dealing with in earnest. also, he has near infinite versions of him going around like kang the conqueror but more cool.

finn is a kid tbh, so mc being the mature he is should not be so petty. those internal monologues don't help his image and character building. but then again, i could say mc is also a (and acting like a) child, so, no better than finn, tbh, resulting in my point being him being/acting better. no mockery filled inter monologues or petty squabbles.

well will just chalk it up to him playing safe so that no one tries to see what makes him tick seeing his otherworld progress.

Ultra Chad!

that's not the point. the point is in game we don't take years to achieve something, mere months or lets say a year. now, it could said he is bound hy natural progession since its not longer a game for him, but real world. that being said, he has a system, no? so, he needs century of good old grinding to amount to something? terribly disappointed indeed.

but men can't give birth (even if they think they can). so, they can say that just some perverted fantasy not some cold hard truth that will make them behave like they supposedly did.