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inchast !? you are discusting

The fic is good no doubt about it. But is it your work ? I’m asking cause some people post dropped works from fanfic.net here with different names Sometimes !! I think you fic Naruto:Trickery is another such work

Don’t forget that his hair is slowly turning silver or white

From Pandora to Pandorika lol

if this was going harem route author most likely would have put harem tag in synopsis , like he had put in his other DxD fic from the start . And let’s be very little little realistic here did you really think makima who’s from what I know and have seen is the most possessive woman would really tolerate another person laying there claim on him ? No , it’s a simple easy to understand fact . And I honestly think Esdeath and lars chemistry is great .

…….. Who are you? Where’s author ? This can’t be the author I know !!Are you authors incredibly generous split parsanaliti ? If you are , then know that I’m with you!! Don’t let the original take the steering ! also DELETE this comment just in case of things Going sideways ….

Also it doesn’t have to be a about bumigume lol

If you ever planned to get toji critically injuring then you can do a thing like the anchor between his sole and physical plain is very weak and then on jujutsu side granny is summoning his sole in a perfect vessel that is waiting for him and this actually works because he was a native to jjk world otherwise it would not have worked !! You get it ? You can base it on like how the shinegames or other summons are from actually different dimensions and sorcerer are only able to summon them because the compatibility between both dimensions !! And toji can be summoned because he’s originally from jjk world !!

Quick question Toji was summoned in shibuya ark right ? Soo why don’t you make that a you know a closer ark where he can meet his son and maybe talk to him a little of a limited amount of course !! It would be…… great i think !! Soooo what do you think?