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  • Terimar
    Terimar2mth
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    I just checked through your profile to see if this fanfiction has come out. Not finding it, i went to look for something to read through the tags and did not even immediately notice that i had opened the work that i had checked a couple of minutes before) In any case, it's 5 stars. Even if there are few chapters yet, you can be sure that it is deserved.

    Dream Infinite
    Anime et bandes dessinées · GloriousMilfHunter
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  • Terimar
    Terimar7mth
    Répondu à NH23kurogame

    It was with Harry Potter that I can only remember "The Game Must Go On" from crossedge on ff, but there he could do it thanks to the artifact initially

    "There's no way those angels will misunderstand that I'm the reincarnation of their God."
    Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice
    Anime et bandes dessinées · DogLickerGods
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  • Terimar
    Terimar8mth
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    Give this story more chapters!

    Hey, you! Yes, you! 
    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Nine_Clouds
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  • Terimar
    Terimar8mth
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    The quality of the translation is quite good. According to the story itself, you can't say much yet, but the beginning and synopsis interested. And if this is a translation, then what is the name in the original?

    Leveling Up In The Anime-Verse!
    Anime et bandes dessinées · 7thFaker
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  • Terimar
    Terimar11mth
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    I haven't read the story yet, I just want to say. You can ignore it, since you are the author, but I would advise you not to prescribe the relationships of minor characters in such detail. Firstly, you are writing a harem, and the relationship of MC with each girl will need to be prescribed at least a little. It would be better to pay attention to them, because in harem stories, paying attention to the relationships of minor characters will always be to the detriment of the relationship of MC. Secondly, most readers, especially about the harem, are not very interested in reading about the relationship of someone else, except MC. In addition, many readers have preferences in female characters, and if the mention that the girl is not with MC, the reaction will be normal, then many people may not like the details (personally, I'm just not interested in reading about the life of someone else other than MC (rare interludes are quite normal)). Thirdly, specifically in the case of Vali, he seems to be a fighting maniac, so in theory he should not pay attention to the relationship. Although here you can already register the characters as you like, so it's not so important

    Lavinia Reni. I will not be adding her to the harem as I want to ship her with Vali. Vali will play a pretty big role along with some other male characters as rivals and allies for Sharon Savant. As such, I want them to have a fleshed out life with their own power increases, relationships, and so on. As such, Lavinia Reni will not be included.
    Dragon of Absolute Sovereignty (DXD)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Legaro
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    Even if at first the work seemed strange in places, especially with all the controversial reincarnations of the MC, but gradually it became interesting enough to even ignore mtl. So don't throw it away.

    Super girlfriends in marvel+dc
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    Even if at first the work seemed strange in places, especially with all the controversial reincarnations of the MC, but gradually it became interesting enough to even ignore mtl. Personally, I do not have the opportunity to access the sequel, so I would be grateful if you do and continue to post chapters.

    please vote here if you want to read more chapters.
    Super girlfriends in marvel+dc
    Anime et bandes dessinées · in_progress123
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
    Répondu à in_progress123

    What is the name of the original? Or how to find it?

    Super girlfriends in marvel+dc
    Anime et bandes dessinées · in_progress123
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    I can say based on your other works the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.

    My Yandere girls in Marvel
    Anime et bandes dessinées · DogLickerGods
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    So that's why the tea situation seemed familiar to me) Xavier's reaction and name MC reminded. I recently read a Chinese Marvel ff, which was just recommended in response to your request in another work. You were probably inspired by it) And no, it's not a reproach or something, just noticed. I can say based on your other works that the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.

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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    There aren't many chapters to say anything specific, but so far I like it. I hope for frequent updates.

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    I was already strong as an individual and I had a substantial military of my own in the form of Eris's main body, Partner, and the various sentinels that were being produced even now. In the worst-case scenario, I could just go nuclear and get enough World Points by ruining this kingdom and maybe the entire continent by offing the nobles and royals that piss me off.
    This isn't High School DxD, damn it!
    Anime et bandes dessinées · The_POZ
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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      "I…I will try my best to satisfy you."
    Adventurer's Guild is not a dating platform! (Translate)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TranslatorFanfict
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    I'm surprised there are so few reviews, because it's a good story. The MC has a normal personality and the plot is quite interesting. I hope the translator will not give up work.

    Adventurer's Guild is not a dating platform! (Translate)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TranslatorFanfict
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    Just wondering how this story will develop

    Marvel: I Can Create Symbiotes!
    Films · Paksss
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    The story is not without flaws, but it is quite interesting. At the moment, mainly because of the potential. Therefore, I hope the author will not abandon, as it was with many other fan fiction, where the hero has the abilities of a Shadow Monarch.

    Marvel Mayhem
    Films · Parv_Naik_0808
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    Quite a good job. It's a little hasty in places, but it's not very annoying here

    Bleach: Another Story
    Anime et bandes dessinées · some_writer
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    And also, with your timeline, it's not clear how things will turn out, but I hope with his knowledge he will prevent in the future what can happen to some heroines, like Jessica and Felicia, regardless of whether they will be in the harem or not. For this, simple shadows would be enough

    Ch 2 Uncontrolled Power
    Marvel Mayhem
    Films · Parv_Naik_0808
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    By the way, asking about readers' recommendations, you risk later encountering their own dissatisfaction. If the places in the harem are limited, then it won't work to add everyone, and everyone's preferences are also different. For example, I don't understand why in almost all Marvel ff a Black Widow is shoved into a harem, even if it is a very small harem. She's hot, of course, but she doesn't seem to stand out so much from the others. But I approve of your choice, I'm talking about Marvel ff in general

    Ch 2 Uncontrolled Power
    Marvel Mayhem
    Films · Parv_Naik_0808
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  • Terimar
    Terimar1yr
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    You have gathered many heroines in the same school with MC, so you subconsciously expect to see most of them in a harem) Are you going to limit it to a certain amount? But I would suggest Jean Grey and Rogue. I don't know if they will be the same age as MC here, but it would definitely be easier for them to get closer

    Ch 2 Uncontrolled Power
    Marvel Mayhem
    Films · Parv_Naik_0808
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