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I just checked through your profile to see if this fanfiction has come out. Not finding it, i went to look for something to read through the tags and did not even immediately notice that i had opened the work that i had checked a couple of minutes before) In any case, it's 5 stars. Even if there are few chapters yet, you can be sure that it is deserved.
It was with Harry Potter that I can only remember "The Game Must Go On" from crossedge on ff, but there he could do it thanks to the artifact initially
Give this story more chapters!
I haven't read the story yet, I just want to say. You can ignore it, since you are the author, but I would advise you not to prescribe the relationships of minor characters in such detail. Firstly, you are writing a harem, and the relationship of MC with each girl will need to be prescribed at least a little. It would be better to pay attention to them, because in harem stories, paying attention to the relationships of minor characters will always be to the detriment of the relationship of MC. Secondly, most readers, especially about the harem, are not very interested in reading about the relationship of someone else, except MC. In addition, many readers have preferences in female characters, and if the mention that the girl is not with MC, the reaction will be normal, then many people may not like the details (personally, I'm just not interested in reading about the life of someone else other than MC (rare interludes are quite normal)). Thirdly, specifically in the case of Vali, he seems to be a fighting maniac, so in theory he should not pay attention to the relationship. Although here you can already register the characters as you like, so it's not so important
Even if at first the work seemed strange in places, especially with all the controversial reincarnations of the MC, but gradually it became interesting enough to even ignore mtl. Personally, I do not have the opportunity to access the sequel, so I would be grateful if you do and continue to post chapters.
So that's why the tea situation seemed familiar to me) Xavier's reaction and name MC reminded. I recently read a Chinese Marvel ff, which was just recommended in response to your request in another work. You were probably inspired by it) And no, it's not a reproach or something, just noticed. I can say based on your other works that the story will be good. Therefore, I hope you will not abandon it and will update it often.
There aren't many chapters to say anything specific, but so far I like it. I hope for frequent updates.
I'm surprised there are so few reviews, because it's a good story. The MC has a normal personality and the plot is quite interesting. I hope the translator will not give up work.
And also, with your timeline, it's not clear how things will turn out, but I hope with his knowledge he will prevent in the future what can happen to some heroines, like Jessica and Felicia, regardless of whether they will be in the harem or not. For this, simple shadows would be enough
By the way, asking about readers' recommendations, you risk later encountering their own dissatisfaction. If the places in the harem are limited, then it won't work to add everyone, and everyone's preferences are also different. For example, I don't understand why in almost all Marvel ff a Black Widow is shoved into a harem, even if it is a very small harem. She's hot, of course, but she doesn't seem to stand out so much from the others. But I approve of your choice, I'm talking about Marvel ff in general
You have gathered many heroines in the same school with MC, so you subconsciously expect to see most of them in a harem) Are you going to limit it to a certain amount? But I would suggest Jean Grey and Rogue. I don't know if they will be the same age as MC here, but it would definitely be easier for them to get closer