suma_Yuki

where is google

really a good way to revile a character

this chapter was massed up hope i can understand it in next chapter 😂😂😂

you dont have to use those ** we can understand what you mean

whats the problem why always cliffs

cuz both are male

this part is kind mixup use name in place of his cuz

nice you guy keep improving ☺️

this chapter was good you show the king in a appropriate way and good luck and i really like your story i want to know more about it and please try publish at least 2 chapters in a week if you can thank you

your story is good but need more work on it and try to improve your writing quality and they you explained explain the characters is good and try to write fast and at last wold building is good but try to give more details good luck