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the writing quality is good, the storyline is ok but could do better, the updates are currently non existent

great story but a little slow on the updates

it's good, the story is interesting, but for me, i feel the scenes are a bit rushed, maybe try slowing down and add more details

I am loving it... more chapters please!!

The progress of the story is good, neither too fast nor too slow, the characters are also good, they have their own problems as well which is good for their character development.

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