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Harper is a pro now 😉
Lol! Ten months later:
Wow, thank you for sharing such an insightful thought! It’s so precious to see outside perspectives and I really appreciate the feedback to help me learn 🫶 Also incredibly flattered to hear that you think I did a decent job with character development. I do usually try to include that as an important part of the story, not really for the sake of it itself but mostly because I’m kind of a romantic who believes true love should change people for the better (yeah cheesy, I know…) So happy you approve of it! Btw I like your example choices of book couples. I thought those were popular because of the classic mysterious and dangerous bad boys lol. At least that’s why I fangirled Xaden… I’m weak for bad boys! Too sad that I don’t know how to write one though. Eli was totally supposed to be a bad boy, but then he came out as a good boy wearing a bad boy’s skin 😂😂 oh well, maybe that’s what I could try again in my next book
POV: when you are a side character and your life’s calling is comedic relief through disgrace 😅 I would like to know what I might write next too, lol. Right now I need a reset, and then I’ll have to figure out if I’m in the headspace for more comedies or angst (or which one I’m better at… feel free to comment on that as much as you like!) So not entirely sure how long it’ll be until then, or whether I’ll move to a different platform at that point, but I’ll post about where to follow my updates at the end of the book if you’re interested! Thank you so much for staying with me this entire time. I don’t say this lightly but your support really means the world to me ❤️
Aww thank you!! Really appreciate you following the story. You were one of my first readers and I’m so happy you’re enjoying it till the end 🥰
Someone tell that to Harper before Eli needs resuscitation! 😂
By the way, so happy to see you again and thank you for your golden tickets! Really glad to have you join me on this second adventure 😊
Lol! Haha no they didn’t write the thing from scratch. That would take years! It’s only a demo to show what they are capable of, so it’s mostly shuffling around existing features they already have in house with some extra catchy ux/rendering effects on top. (all throwaway code, so they probably had extra incentive to do it fast and dirty) I see what you mean though, I worked on eye tracking algorithms myself and can tell you that the technology they have there with that level of accuracy doesn’t even exist 😅 but hey, let’s give Eli a chance to impress his girl!
Hahaha I’m currently thinking about good kids names 😉🤭 that might happen!