Mr_Simping

Like this story it has good progression and the system is well thought out. But it misses on a few small things that me as someone who plays baseball can’t ignore. Like the grip when he throws the ball the steps before he catches they way he has to plant his foot as he throws. But if you never played baseball or arent a fan you won’t notice the small missing details.

Or even when he goes to college goes being a d1 college player would be good enough to make swedens team

I know it’s still early but when he become pro even minor league can you make a world baseball classic arc where he tries to bring Sweden to championship

W plot

Talk about how Rick Ross was a prison guard

W plot and world background

No diddy

This is not your book their is already a book like this on the site I guess it’s cool if you want to provide it for free to people but don’t claim it’s yours.

Please write more chapters or did the cartel get to you 😭😭

Thanks for the chapter