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So far story is quite good and interesting only advice: you should change your cover each time i see that cover it feels like the novel is dropped.
Until cho 30 it was gripping would be better if chapters is being updated daily. Only think that i didnt like is mc is little bit too agresif to everything.
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It would be good if he get capture by thme so he can find hermione.
Love the story. I have nerver seen a hp topic like that i hope you wont drop this.........................................................................
I like the story pls update more episode.
I offer you all my stones for 2 week for nex chp.
looking for new chp.
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